I am sure I have a nice long-winded post about how awesome my thanksgiving was, but for the moment I need your help.
I'm working on developing a website (ok, actually I've developed it, it just needs some finishing touches) for my technology class this semester. The assignment was to create a personal website (with a variety of constraints, like the presence of 20 pages). I decided to create an online portfolio that I could show to a prospective employer.
What I'm looking for from you is feedback. What works and what doesn't? Where did my editing skills fail me? What do you wish was there that isn't?
http://folioleaves.wordpress.com/
I really appreciate your feedback. It will help me a lot. Hope your Monday has shaped up well.
I'm working on developing a website (ok, actually I've developed it, it just needs some finishing touches) for my technology class this semester. The assignment was to create a personal website (with a variety of constraints, like the presence of 20 pages). I decided to create an online portfolio that I could show to a prospective employer.
What I'm looking for from you is feedback. What works and what doesn't? Where did my editing skills fail me? What do you wish was there that isn't?
http://folioleaves.wordpress.com/
I really appreciate your feedback. It will help me a lot. Hope your Monday has shaped up well.
4 comments:
I admit I didn't read everything, so I don't really have helpful feedback, but I LOVE your photos. The look and feel of the site are lovely.
Oh good, I'm glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to look through it. I appreciate it.
Em...I found this phrase in the bookbinding tab a little awkward...
"I found the class to support my goal of rare book librarianship very well". Also, to be consistent, I would say "undergraduate work" instead of "undergrad" in the first paragraph under bookbinding. The last thing I saw was the spacing of your email address was a little odd on your contact page.
Your website looks fantastic Em! I'm super impressed...and as a prospective employer, it would be a great way to showcase yourself.
Love ya,
Eliza
Eliza,
Thanks for your feedback, I made some changes. I'm not sure exactly how the email address displays on your screen, but I purposely put a space between each part to prevent spammers from just picking up on the link.
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